Book · About 240 pages
Building a StoryBrand 2.0: Clarify Your Message So Customers Will Listen
Donald Miller · Goodreads Paid Beginner
This is the most widely used playbook for turning a fuzzy brand message into a clear one, and its whole premise is exactly your problem: if you confuse, you lose. Miller gives you a repeatable structure (position the customer as the hero, you as the guide, name the problem you solve) that produces a homepage headline and tagline people actually understand. Treat it as a starting framework, not a formula to copy word for word.
- Lead with the customer's problem and the result they want, not your company name or a mission-sounding slogan.
- A clear message beats a clever one: if a stranger cannot say what you do in a few seconds, the words are failing.
- Use the one-liner structure (problem, solution, result) to draft a headline and tagline you can test and tighten.