Book · About 240 pages

Building a StoryBrand 2.0: Clarify Your Message So Customers Will Listen

Donald Miller · Goodreads Paid Beginner

This is the most widely used playbook for turning a fuzzy brand message into a clear one, and its whole premise is exactly your problem: if you confuse, you lose. Miller gives you a repeatable structure (position the customer as the hero, you as the guide, name the problem you solve) that produces a homepage headline and tagline people actually understand. Treat it as a starting framework, not a formula to copy word for word.

  • Lead with the customer's problem and the result they want, not your company name or a mission-sounding slogan.
  • A clear message beats a clever one: if a stranger cannot say what you do in a few seconds, the words are failing.
  • Use the one-liner structure (problem, solution, result) to draft a headline and tagline you can test and tighten.

The question it answers

  1. How do I write a tagline and homepage headline that actually says what we do, instead of a vague inspirational line?

Read with it

  1. You asked how to say what you actually do instead of a vague inspirational line, and this piece is built around exactly that... HubSpot Marketing Blog Article · About a 12 minute read How to Write a Value Proposition (7 Top Examples and a Template) HubSpot
  2. Video · About 16 minutes How to clarify your message so people listen (TEDxNashville) Donald Miller
eChai Partner Brands The partnership →