Harry Dry's three: make it visual (words people can picture), make it falsifiable (specific claims a competitor couldn't copy-paste), and make it unique to you. Vague, safe copy is invisible copy. Write like you're talking to one real person, not addressing a market.
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Julian Shapiro's deeply practical framework for landing pages, including the desire-minus-friction conversion model, a canonical growth resource.