Brand, web & content

How do I write the copy for my landing page hero section when I have three different types of customers using my product?

The short answer

Pick one. A hero that talks to three people talks to no one, so lead with the segment that pays fastest or hurts most, and let the rest find themselves further down the page. You can always run separate landing pages per segment later, but a diluted hero on day one just teaches you nothing about which message actually lands.

Go deeper, your way

3 hand-picked resources, 3 link-checked. Pick how you want to dig in.

▶️ Video
✓ Link checked Free Beginner

Why we picked it Alex Cattoni walks through landing page copy the way a working copywriter does: pick one ideal customer and write every line to that single person, from headline to call to action. Seeing single-segment hero copy built out loud makes the three-audience problem obvious, you cannot write one great line for three people at once, so you choose. Use it as a worked example of the voice and structure, then adapt the specifics to your own primary customer.

How to Write A Landing Page That Converts

On YouTube (Copy Posse) by Alex Cattoni Short video, roughly 15 to 20 minutes

  • Write to one specific customer, not a blended average of everyone who might buy.
  • The headline earns the next line: lead with the one clear benefit that customer cares about most.
  • Match the copy to where that reader is coming from and what they already want, then make the next step obvious.
Watch on YouTube youtube.com
📄 Article
✓ Link checked Free Beginner

Why we picked it Shapiro gives you a concrete framework you can apply the same afternoon: write a header that is fully descriptive of what you sell, then build your value prop from a bad alternative, a better solution, and an action statement. It is free, example-heavy, and written for founders drafting their own page, not for agencies. Read it with your own headline open in another tab and rewrite as you go.

Startup Handbook: Landing Page Copywriting

From julian.com by Julian Shapiro Long read, about 30 minutes

  • Your header should pass one test: if a visitor reads only that line, do they know exactly what you sell.
  • Build a value prop by naming the bad alternative people use today, how you beat it, then turning that into an action statement.
  • Cut vague slogans and add a hook plus a subheader that explains why the claim is believable.
Open julian.com
🛠️ Tool
✓ Link checked Free Beginner

Why we picked it This is a free, browsable library of real SaaS landing pages (ConvertKit, Loom, Gumroad, and more) with the actual hero copy visible, so you can compare how strong pages handle their audience. Look specifically at how the best ones commit to one primary customer in the hero versus the ones that try to cover several, and you will see which reads sharper. It is a reference shelf to study, not a rulebook, borrow the pattern, not the words.

SaaS Landing Page Examples (Swipefile)

From swipefile.com Browsable gallery, dozens of real pages

  • Study real hero copy side by side to see how tightly the strongest pages define who they are for.
  • Notice that single-segment heroes read sharper than pages hedging across multiple audiences at once.
  • Free to browse and organized by category, so you can pull a handful of comparable examples fast.
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